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I KNEW IT
But on a serious note, this turned out pretty good. But man, that cloak. It's hard wrapping my mind around that, but it's a really great and unique idea. I like 'drastic' perspectives like that, I can understand that they are hard to pull off, but for me it feels like the head is a bit too big when compared to the shoulders, and when I try to look up like he does, I think the position would also be different (but ah it's hard to do this without a ref, I can only imagine this myself, so take this with a pinch of salt).
Another thing which strikes me, he looks a bit 'flat' on the legs and chest, like he got into a molding machine (for the lack of a better description, sorry 6_9).
But apart from that, it's really good. I especially like the shading on the cloak. The colors you picked go well with each other, and even when it's a rather limited palette, everything stands out nicely by itself.
I'm looking forward to hear the story behind him!
Thanks for giving me your perspective on this! It's helped me fix plenty of errors and improve on my understanding of perspective. Every little bit of constructive criticism helps, I dearly appreciate it.
Yaaaay Drei~
As for the story, he's definitely one of several 'major' characters. (As much as I can say without giving away spoilers, hah.) He's actually not nearly as serious as I make him out to be in this scene, but it's for dramatic effect.